Sep 11 11 7:31 PM

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Can someone help? The story's pretty close to being done, plus some tweaking of the details. It's an "outbreak" story, but I've been told it's "boring." I'd like a second opinion. Anyone wanna help? Please PM me. I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks! smile

And, as usual, if anyone needs help with their own work, I'll return the favour.